So well written. It’s very rough still, but any free minute she gets, she is working on it.
I let her bring it in the car so she could read it to me. She is constantly checking in with me and reading what she wrote.
Her Title: It wasn’t very particular
Table of Contents
“It was a clear summer day.” 1
“Boring and gross 🤢 “2
“History blistory “ 👩🏼🏫 3
“Hospitals and babies 👶 “ 4
“Babies and love ❤️ “5
“Family 👨👩👦 and movies 🍿🎥”6
“Late…⏰” 7
“ home 🏠 and work “8
“Flash back “9
“ world 🌎 of misery”10
“ shine ✨ “ 11
“ broken 😞 “ 12
“ Children at a hospital 🏩 and how they got there” 13
“ chocolate 🍫 “ 14
“ ping pong 🏓 “ 15
And so….here are some excerpts.
This is from CHOCOLATE. Now mind you…this is stream of consciousness writing. A dump. No attention to grammar or spelling.
The sentence fluency and word choice is that of a writer.
More?
Ping Pong:
SHe continues ….we will put this together shortly. She is still working on the cohesiveness. As an English teacher, I can see her immense creativity and talent.
Tot, you rock my world!
CUTIE PIE! Will you become an author someday?
